This is a strong foundation. It already feels responsible and patient-centred.

What I’ve done below is:

correct small errors

tighten the flow

make it easier to read on a screen

strengthen clarity and professionalism

keep your tone calm and respectful

Nothing has been over-complicated. This is about clarity and trust.

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Feedback and Complaints Policy

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Our commitment to you

At Health in Motion, we are committed to providing our patients with a high standard of care and service.

We welcome feedback and aim to continually improve what we do. Patient experience is an important part of how we review and develop our services.

If you have a concern or complaint about the care you have received from one of our osteopaths or team members, we encourage you to let us know.

Most issues can be resolved quickly and sensitively when raised directly with us in the first instance.

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Our care promise

We will always:

Provide and explain our best clinical judgement

Respect and value your wishes

Protect your confidentiality

Maintain clean, safe and secure facilities

Clearly explain treatment plans to support informed choice

Discuss alternative options where appropriate

Communicate in everyday language

Refer you promptly if your needs are outside our scope of practice

Obtain your consent throughout treatment so you understand what we are doing and why

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What you can expect from us

We will never:

Mislead you about your condition

Overstate the effectiveness of our treatments

Recommend more treatment than we believe is necessary to support your goals

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If something does not feel right

If something does not feel right, we will:

Treat your concern seriously and in confidence

Aim to resolve it promptly and respectfully

Use feedback, including complaints, to review and improve our service

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How to raise a concern

Step 1 – Speak to us

Please raise your concern either verbally or in writing with the practitioner involved, or speak to our front desk team.

If we are unable to speak with you immediately, we will arrange a suitable time.

You can also:

Email: [email protected]

Call: 020 8991 5280

You may also submit your concern using the contact form on this page.

Step 2 – Support team review

If your concern is not resolved to your satisfaction at this stage, it will be escalated to our Support Team.

You will be contacted by email within 3 working days from:
[email protected]

If you are using the contact form, please indicate that you would like your concern referred to the Support Team.

Step 3 – Independent advice

If you remain dissatisfied, you may contact the Institute of Osteopathy for advice:

Freephone: 01582 488455

Email: [email protected]

Step 4 – Formal complaint to regulator

If your concern is still unresolved and you wish to make a formal complaint, you may contact the General Osteopathic Council:

Telephone: 020 7357 6655

Email: [email protected]

Why this version works better

Clear structure with headings and steps

Easier to scan on mobile

Professional but still human

No ambiguity about what to do next

Meets expectations for a complaints policy

Small optional addition (if you want)

You could add one soft line at the very end:

We take all feedback seriously and use it to improve the care we provide.

Final reassurance

This now reads:

calm

fair

transparent

clinically appropriate

Exactly what you want for a footer-linked policy page.

Next step

You have now completed all core pages.

👉 As promised, next we move to internal linking
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